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July 24, 2012
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I see ... by X3carlyX3 I see ... by X3carlyX3
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Well done. Very well done indeed.
The way the title trails off is creative, and allows the audience to imagine what it is the girl is looking at, as her expression could be one of any number of feelings; shock, awe, wonder, etc.
The pic itself is simple, nothing fancy, but it is unique to post it on a black background in order to bring more attention the the girl herself.
Lines are clean and it is easy to tell where and what everything is.
Her outfit and excessories are only highlighted in black marker, but I think it is that simplicity along with the monochromatic format of the picture that helps draw in the audience's eye.
The most striking feature I would have to say are her eyes; The lashes are long and full, but as they have been left white, it tempts the viewer to get a closer look, while the eyes themselves were portrayed with reat detail.
All in all, very, very well done. Simple and clean, yet highly effective.

(If this critique was too harsh or unfair, I apologize. This is only my second critique and I'm not sure if I have the hang of this yet.)
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Art-game-lover Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
X3carlyX3 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Hobbyist
Art-game-lover Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
<3 ^+^
biddix Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
--_-- sadly i cannot write a critiqe on this.....can't find a problem.........*good for you. bad for me.*
X3carlyX3 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Hobbyist
ahaha thank you :XD:
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